Tuesday, May 8, 2012
Charlotte's Web / comments by David A.
Fern saves a pig from being killed by her father. Fern raises the pig and names him Wilbur. Their uncle buys the pig and keeps it forever.
It is given this title because it says the spider's name and her special web.
David A., 3rd grade, 2011-2012
The Bears on Hemlock Mountain / comments by Abbey G.
It is about a boy who's mom makes a dinner and she needs a very big pot. She is very worried. Jonathan doesn't come back, she gets more worried. His dad came and found him under the pot. The baers were all around the pot.
It is given this title because through out the story they talk about the bears on the mountain.
2 stars
by Abbey G., 3rd grade, 2011-2012.
Dr. Desoto comments by Tori SJG.
Dr. DeSoto is a little mouse who is a dentist. He doesn't allow any animals that are scary or harmful to mice. One day a fox came by with a terrible toothache. The fox pleaded and pleaded. Dr. DeSoto discussed this problem with his wife. They decided they would treat him. When Dr. Desoto climbed in to the mouth he found a rotten bicuspid that would have to come out. They put him in a deep sleep with laughing gas, and they pulled the tooth out. When the fox awoke Dr. DeSoto said he would have the foxes fake tooth ready in the morning. As he was walking home the fox decided to try to eat the mouse tomorrow. Mr and Mrs. DeSoto were worried, but they came up with a plan. The next day the fox came in and the tooth was put in. Then Dr. DeSoto put some liquid on his teeth so they would never hurt again. When the fox tried to open his mouth he couldn't because of the liquid so he couldn't eat Dr. DeSoto.
The book was given this title most likely because the main characters name is Dr. DeSoto.
4 Stars
Tori SJG, 5th grade, 2011-2012
Millions of Cats comments by Eden K.
Long time ago there was old man and old women, they were lonely. So the old man went to mountain to go get one cat. When he was looking for the pretty cat he thought the million cats was pretty so he brought all the cats. But old women says let just get one pretty cats. So the old women went outside. All the cats disappeared. Only one cat was left. She say say that she wasn't pretty. So she didn't say anything so they pet her after all she grow up really pretty.
This book was given this title because the old man brought millions of cats.
4 stars
Eden K, 4th grade, 2011-2012
Millions of Cats comments by Piper K.
There was a old man and women and all they wanted a cat. So the old man went to the hills and he found millions of cats. But he remembered that she said one cat but he did not care so he took all of them. An now they are a happy family.
This book was given this title because he found a hill that had millions of cats.
4 stars
Piper K, 3rd grade, 2011-2012
Millions of Cats / Comments by Nick A.
The very old man and woman they were very lonely. And then he went outside. And saw a lot of cats so he was trying to decide which one he wanted. And he picked one and then the lady picked one and then they went back in the house. The end!
The book was given this title because there's a lot of cats.
3 stars by Nick A. 3rd grade 2011-2012
Millions of Cats / Comments by Brooke M.
The woman wanted a cat so the man went to a village of cats. So, the man picked 1 cat the 2,3,4. Next thing he gets all the cat. The woman said that is way to much cats. She only wanted one.
The book was given this title because he cam back with a lot of cats.
3 stars by Brooke M. 3rd grade 2011-2012
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