One day a boy went over Hemlock Mountain to get an iron pot. When he got to his Aunt's house he ate cookies, he drank milk, and took a nap. Then when he was on his way home there were bears. He got under the iron pot and hid. Then he heard a crunch. It was his dad and they went home.
I could picture it in my head and that it was tempting to read.
4 stars
by Sarah S., 3rd grade
Tuesday, April 6, 2010
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