Tuesday, April 6, 2010

The Bears on Hemlock Mountain by Alice Dalgliesh

One day a boy went over Hemlock Mountain to get an iron pot. When he got to his Aunt's house he ate cookies, he drank milk, and took a nap. Then when he was on his way home there were bears. He got under the iron pot and hid. Then he heard a crunch. It was his dad and they went home.

I could picture it in my head and that it was tempting to read.

4 stars

by Sarah S., 3rd grade

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