Friday, September 28, 2012

Dear Mr. Henshaw - comments by Edan K.

Ramona's father lost his job so he smoked a lot more than before.  Ramona is the girl who hates her father's smoking.  She doesn't let him smoke.  She thought her family wasn't a happy family.  After all, they were happy again.  Her dad got his job and Ramona and her sister did perform at church for Christmas.

4 stars

by Eden K., 5th grade, 2012-2013

No comments: