Tuesday, September 18, 2012

Lily's Crossing -- comments by Claire T., 5th grade, 2012-2013

Every summer this girl named Lily would go to Rockaway for vacation.  That summer her father had to go to fight in war.  Lily was sad, but she got happy when she made a friend named Albert.  They told each other secrets and lies.  They also tell each other about the family and have a sad and fun summer.

I think it was given this title because of the boats that crossed from country to country and Lily watching them as they go by.

3 stars

comments by Claire T., 5th grade, 2012-2013

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